Spiritual Journeys #2 |
When I Lay My Burdens Bare |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Worry came to visit. I dropped to my knees and prayed. Lord, please forgive me if I've gone astray. Some days I feel lost, not knowing what to do. It is in those times when I sit talking quietly to you. What a peace then overcomes me when I lay my burdens bare. There is no greater gift than God's precious love~ It is everywhere. I've seen the paintings in the air brushed by the hand of God~ Lonestar |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gentle Spirited One, how deeply this touches. An eloquent and divine expression of your abiding faith in God and the power of prayer. Love & God's Light, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Linda, every day of my life I come to realize more and more that it is through his grace alone, that I am..... Thank you, little angel... I've seen the paintings in the air |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Lovely expressions of the real serenity to be found in turning to Him~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
There is no denying the power of God. This is so uplifting Donna. Well done. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
This piece testifies how He leadeth you beside still waters. Delightfully written! Rae |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you for this poem, I am a worry wart, please keep me in your prayers! ~ARH |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This hits the spot with me today. Thank you for your lovely rendering. Joyce |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
I can relate to this so well. My Bible and prayer are always at the head of my bed and I cling to them. The absolute peace that overcomes me when I ask God to lay his hand on me is undescribable, but I am sure you too know this feeling. Beautifully put, thanks. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Soft and gentle are your words on the soul as I too feel his Love abounding. -Bob |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
this one is beautiful and peaceful. I loved it. lacydee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Worry used to be a big part of my life, it changes nothing, a waste of time and most likely the things one worries about never come to pass. It is the things you never even thought about that happen, so as in the Lord's prayer, we should say "Thy will be done" I enjoyed your poem very much. |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Very nicely put! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Love is everywhere, and you have an open heart, Gentle one. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
When I grow anxious and the silence is driving me insane. I sit down and pray as well. The calmness that washes over me is amazing. The love I receive from God and Jesus is amazing. I wish I didn't struggle so much with surrendering. I love your poem. Thank you for sharing. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
I love a short, sweet, sincere poem. I love this. |
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sufipoems Junior Member
since 2008-06-14
Posts 13 |
KInd words,my friend.Real,cool and humble.We do,though,need to travel the journey to find our true self. All the best! |
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