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DodgeViper
New Member

since 2007-01-31

Posts 3

0 posted 2007-01-31 08:15 AM

"A NEW END"
I wink at the Sun
Flaunt energy for fun
New Projects, new timetables
Excitement grows beyond any level
Energy at its zenith
Gone Berserk!! people panic
No stone unturned
every carb burned
To mark a new beginning
I celebrate without thinking
wisemen said
Life ends with death
Time only measures infinity
Horizon only stretches to eternity
But we,
We come and We go
for,What are the beginnings,so
Everything ends
Mortality descends
I said
But enlightened said
To mark a new end
We start, we start
To mark a new death
We live, we live..

- By Vishav Vikram Kapoor a.ka. DodgeViper

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2007-01-31 02:38 PM

W e L c O M e ! ! !

WOW!!! What a Great first post. I really enjoyed the Energy and Imagery that your poem exhumed out from my mind and spirit as I was reading it and, also, I liked that your poem was very interpretive. For me, your poem emphasized the idea that there is (there is) life after death.

Again, Welcome, good job and God bless,
-Bob

DodgeViper
New Member

since 2007-01-31

Posts 3

2 posted 2007-02-01 02:14 AM

thanks a lot man...i wasnt expectin such a warm welcome..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-02-01 09:09 AM

Vishav~

Welcome to this ever-growing circle of poetic friendships~

'To mark a new end
We start, we start
To mark a new death
We live, we live..'

What a beautifully positive message~

Enjoy yourself ... explore each forum ... read lots, reply lots and drop us another post !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Marie777
Member

since 2007-01-30

Posts 93
MI.

4 posted 2007-02-02 12:52 PM

A poem of hope. Good job!!!

Marie

Hugs,
Marie

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

5 posted 2007-02-03 04:35 PM

Welcome!  I agree to your post being so energetic and life giving.  I'll be looking forward to more from you.

   God bless,
     Rae

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