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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-01-19 03:56 PM

Judgment Day.

I don’t believe in God
and I don’t believe in luck,
it is lucky God has made me
find the truth about his book.
He wrote so many versions
that I cannot read them all,
so it’s easier if your realize
that there is no God at all.

Others have their ‘One True God’
to see them through their day,
while others win the Lottery
as ‘Good Luck’ comes their way.
But me, I‘ll stand on my own feet
and always earn my pay,
for I know I’m never lucky
with no God to guide my way.

I could kid myself in thinking
that my God was by my side,
and then from the facts of living
I would find somewhere to hide.
It may bring a nice warm comfort
to the lining of my soul,
but without my own direction
would I really live life whole.

There’s a place that they call Heaven.
There’s a place that they call Hell.
There are devils and some demons,
there are even gods as well.
But the gods are also demons
and they roam about our land,
so I don’t trust luck to devils
and I make my own true stand.

When I’m old, and tired, and knackered
then I just might change my mind.
At the point that I am dying
it is then that I may find,
that the God who walked beside me
was the one who saw me through,
but till then I trust the Judgment
that was born in me and you!

Ivor G Davies.

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

I Love Jesus
Member

since 2006-12-12

Posts 216
ar.

1 posted 2007-01-19 05:50 PM

God bless you always!

Fairplay
Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 222
England

2 posted 2007-01-23 09:45 PM

God loves a tryer........

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

3 posted 2007-01-29 06:31 PM

awsome poem. this poem indeed made me wonder i will get back to you with those thoughts

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

4 posted 2007-01-29 07:27 PM

Thank you all for reading....

Ivor

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

5 posted 2007-01-29 10:56 PM

Nice read. That's where my problems begin, when I lean unto my own understanding. God's ways are so much higher than my ways.

Rae

Marie777
Member

since 2007-01-30

Posts 93
MI.

6 posted 2007-01-30 01:43 AM

You are a really good writer and very good flow. God is the answer and someday you will see this. I really enjoyed your "form" of writing. Very smooth and easy to read. Hugs,
Marie

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

7 posted 2007-02-11 03:50 AM

Rae, Marie,

Thanks for the response, I feel that God gave us free will to decide our own way and we were made in his image.

Therefore we have a personal responsibility to make our own decisions to go the way we choose.

This amounts to the same thing surely....

Ivor

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