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Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
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0 posted 2006-08-08 12:48 PM


IF I TOLD YOU “I LOVE YOU”


If I told you “I love you”
No less than once a day
For all the wonderful years
We have shared at work and play.

If I thanked you each and every moment
As your smile touched my heart and soul
Always showing that you need me
I still could not complete my goal.

If I gave you affection in a thousand ways
I would fail to fully convey
How much you are my world of joy,
My friend, and my lover, who doesn’t stray.

Our memories of the years past
Give us happiness night and day
Our dreams of tomorrow’s burdens
Are why we choose to pray.

Someday in heaven we will reside
While earth will forget who we are
Side by side as we change to dust
We will live and love behind a star.

So let me say it one more time
I love you more than life itself
Your presence is my joy of joys
For without you I loose myself.


By Tom Zart
Author of
LOVE WAR AND MORE


© Copyright 2006 Tom Zart - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-08-08 06:28 PM


a lovely poem, Tom

M

Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
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2 posted 2006-08-12 11:55 PM


Thank you for your kind words of support for my work.
jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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3 posted 2006-08-16 12:14 PM


Tom Zart,  Now that was a beautiful poem.  I throughly enjoyed it.

Hugs Kimberly

Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
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4 posted 2006-08-16 08:51 AM


Thank you for your kind words of support for my work.
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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5 posted 2006-08-17 01:57 PM


Tom,

Though words do seem always to fall a bit short when expressing one's true love for another, I think that you've done a very very good job in this poem at acknowledging and commending the one that you love.

Again, thank you for sharing and God bless.

-Bob

Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
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6 posted 2006-08-18 07:58 AM


Thank you thank you thank you.
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