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Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
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0 posted 2006-07-10 12:17 PM


SOMEDAY


Life on earth is a dangerous journey
As we walk down survival's road,
Fearing some day that we might suffer.
Lord, we pray you’ll lighten our load.

Our own ignorance keep us happy
For there's so much we're not to know,
Like who shall die, where, when and how
As the storms of our seasons blow.

No hope for human brotherhood
With one world, one race, one rule,
We die from too much knowledge
And the greediness of a fool.

We travel now in outer space,
All continents and seven seas.
As long as we're alive,
We’ll search for memories.

Some day there’ll be a brand new earth
Where the righteous rule, night and day.
No tears, no death, pain nor sorrow
From the world that passed away.

By Tom Zart
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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2006-07-10 06:32 PM


Tom,

As expressed by your poem, "Someday" does appear very promising and I much look forward to it.

God bless.

-Bob

Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 682

2 posted 2006-07-11 12:41 PM


Thank you Bob.
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2006-07-11 02:58 PM


"We die from too much knowledge
And the greediness of a fool."

Isn't that the truth? Our late son used to say until we're living for the good of all, we aren't fit to live on the same planet as God. Yet, we're all hoping to.

Thanks for sharing

    Rae

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
4 posted 2006-07-13 06:15 PM


I loved these  stanzas. Beautiful, amazing.

No hope for human brotherhood
With one world, one race, one rule,
We die from too much knowledge
And the greediness of a fool.

We travel now in outer space,
All continents and seven seas.
As long as we're alive,
We’ll search for memories.

Some day there’ll be a brand new earth
Where the righteous rule, night and day.
No tears, no death, pain nor sorrow
From the world that passed away.


Nice flow.

Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 682

5 posted 2006-07-13 10:15 PM


THANK YOU FELLOW POETS FOR ALL YOUR HELP AND SUPPORT FOR MY WORK.
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
6 posted 2006-07-14 05:00 PM




You're very Welcome!


-Bob

Tom Zart
Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682

7 posted 2006-07-16 10:18 PM


Bob,
be ready for you never know what I will
post next.

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