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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Many souls are searching Their longings go unknown In search for untold comfort Lost and so alone. Deep inside they’re yearning For what they do not know They fill their lives with sorrow While searching for their goal. Substitutes are offered All to no avail Mar the body, scar the mind Futile attempts all fail. The only one solution The satisfying key Lies in life with Jesus Fulfilling, peaceful, free. The yearning in all humans The searching each one feels Is made complete in Christ the King To Whom each one must kneel. He’ll either be your Savior A friend for all of time Or He’ll be your enemy And far from Him reside. Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Another good one. I do have a suggestion for the last line of the last stanza. Hope you don't mind. "He’ll either be your Savior A friend for all of time Or He’ll be your enemy And far from Him reside." I'm quite sure you mean that whoever considers Christ their enemy is residing far from Him. It apprears that HE is the subject therefore the last 2 lines don't go together. Suggestions: Or He'll be your enemy Because you walk in pride Or He'll be your enemy 'cause on others you relied Or He'll be your enemy Since you refuse His guide God bless Rae |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Thank you for the ideas Rae. I will consider them. They are all great ideas on how to end the final stanza. Thanks again. Sheri Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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