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Juju
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0 posted 2004-08-06 11:20 PM



“The true way”

Grass can’t grow with out rain and sun
Like with out your help and your love!
In this world there’s many trials.
You were the light, when I was blind
-From all the distractions in life-
You lifted me above the clouds
So I could see the storm below
I know I’m a better person
Because you showed me the true way

-Juju


© Copyright 2004 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Copperbell
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1 posted 2004-08-09 02:08 PM


Nice to read your post here JuJu  
poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-04-22 07:34 AM


when it comes down to it, there is so much to be said, as to the poem.

Not being so much about the poem, but how you feel after the poem is read.

I feel good about this poem

this below is something I wrote in thoughts earlier
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It is not what the poem is about, but the way reading the poem, makes you feel inside your own body.

Never try and understand the poem, or attempt to translate what you think the poet was thinking.

Let to poem be who you are and what you want to poem to mean.

If reading a poem a second time, you see other pictures, from the first time,
allow those pictures to be painted within your own head and mind.

And most of all let the poem be you, and become that poem.

When reading a poem makes you feel good, in your eyes the poem is good.

The same goes for being happy and sad. Live the life you have, not the life of the poet.


Christopher W Herbert: 22 April 2006

a poet who cares

Musicmaker1969
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3 posted 2006-04-23 08:17 AM


Juju, what a lovely poem.  And it is so full of truth.  We have to often go through the trials only to be lifted up above them to see what we are to learn or grow from them.  Very lovely and extremely well expressed.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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