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Moonlight Rainbows |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“MOONLIGHT RAINBOWS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I wonder why I feel like I do at times, when I walk with you holding hands… It’s a feeling I have deep inside me, my beating heart calls, as it expands… A path we follow through the forest, listening to sounds of the warm night… All I want is to hold you close again, for you to whisper, things are alright… Time seems to flow slower, as we stroll, gentle whispers shared, words spoken… Faces meet tenderly, one to another, vows to each other, never to abandon… Moonlight rainbows seen in the dark, into the evening they seem to stay… See the shadows gather into darkness, yet fear not, for I will not leave away… ~~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely done Bill. A different cadence from your norm, but very nicely done... Like the style and the words.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I love the concept of moonlight rainbows... can see them as I read you. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful as always Bill... Much enjoyed this style. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Your poem was enchanting. It gave me the same feeling as beetoven's moonlight Sonata. A comforting and thoughtfull peice that leaves the reader pondering. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Standing alone on the terrace her face lit by a single lamp rain splashing her gently her dress transparent caused by damp watchful eyes appraised her from inside as she and the rain danced as one the silhouette the tapping of her heels synchronised beating of his heart had begun completely unaware of the vision she made she lifted her face to the light he glimpsed a smile and heard her laugh turning to face him - he felt passion ignite The voice telling him to take this chance he opened the door with almost no sound as they moved together and began to dance orchestrated raindrops splashing the ground A single owl whispered in the night air bodies locking - retreating then advancing silk slipping off leaving her bare In the moonlight, shadows dancing... ® RainbowGirl I do hope you don't mind, but your poem was so enchanting :-) Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
As smooth as a baby's cheek, Bill...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill Your beating heart in rhythm to your voice...so sweet! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...Another beautiful and soul-stirring poem. Each time I read one of your poems, I am awestruck by its beauty and gentle words. ***Ivy Rose |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I knew I'd like this one from the title... what a beautiful image that presents! *S* And I was right... this is just lovely. *S* RG: That's too beautiful to be hidden in a response. *S* And it's so good to see your words! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I like the idea of moonlight rainbows...very original, and very lovely thoughts. Pen how you truly feel... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I have been waiting almost two long months to read this gorgeous poem of yours and it was well worth the wait! (big hugggsssss) I'm so sorry I couldn't read it yesterday, I was out with my dad for dinner and getting a few presents from him for my birthday but I'm so happy I found it as I would never miss your work! This is sooooooo beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, may that loves hand always cradle yours dearly, I'm adding this to my library now, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ahhh, BC, you get my heart pumping in the morning. This is, as are all your romance poems, delightful. Hugs this bright and glorious Fall day. Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, you know that I love this, being the hopeless romantic that I am. thanks for sharing this beautiful thought of a "moonlight rainbow". I love it. Love to All, Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill You are forever the ultimate romantic and your words of love shine through each and every verse. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
awww..this is beautiful. I love it (^_~) Julie |
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reluctantlyme Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 34 |
There is a peacefulness and security translated through this poem that I found comforting. The images of walking through the woods, moonlight and a voice saying that everything's alright...perfect. No matter how good looking she is... someone, somewhere is glad she's gone. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Thank you for sharing your beautiful words. Enjoyed. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Enchanting as usual Bill, if you ever publish I know I would buy. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very romantic with longings to fill. Enjoyed. Deb |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  nice poem |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely Bill M |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* this was so beautiful, I simply love it! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
So gentle and loving. Lovely images, Bill, quite lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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