Open Poetry #23 |
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Lady of the Curtains |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
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Amber walks along. She pulls a suitcase from the water. Dripping with no handle, a faux black leather bundle. She wonders what's inside it but she cannot find an entry. She drops it in the river; knowing not that others did the same. She is lady of the curtains for she loves the touch of windows. Yet she only answers to lady of the candles, for she wears her hair in faint light like flowers of the sun and when you try to reach her she is gone. Like smoke above the mountain, like silver in a fountain, like arrows in a letter, like knives that fall unfettered. And she smells of clover though it is October. And though I call her name she is gone. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sad poem. But I still like it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
not sure I understand the first verse..but I felt drawn to read the rest and was glad I did, Mike hugss M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very mysterious, Mike...seems like it is just the beginning of something more... |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
AMAZING, but your work has always been that way..... ![]() Lauren~ Deep inside the stillness |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, everyone. I fell asleep listening to Songs of Leonard Cohen last night, and I guess Suzanne really stuck in my mind. |
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