Open Poetry #23 |
The Journey |
Juliette Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 13Colorado |
to a world he's never known before. Anxious anticipation, he paces himself, a long journey-he travels alone. No footprints to follow- he walks where no life existed before. This desert is a desolate place -no tree, no insects, no sign of life in sight. He gazes amid his surroundings awakening- to the purity of each step, each grain of hot sand, the echo of his own breath. He senses no fear-he too has pureness in his soul... like the virgin sand. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Juliette, welcome to Passions! I think from reading your first post that you are going to find a welcome home here in our blue halls. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. An interesting POV, being all alone and enjoying the 'purity' of a virgin land. May he tread lightly and thoughtfully. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Feelings of the first man? Welcome to Passions. Enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Yay!!! Awwwwwww, this is a gorgeous and beautiful debut, sweet friend, such purity and admiration shines from your heart here, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Juliette, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juliette, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-28-2002 11:00 AM).] |
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Juliette Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 13Colorado |
One for All: Sunshine, Midnitesun, RSWells, Mistletoe Angel: Thank you all for your warm welcome and taking the time to read and comment. I look forward to sharing your writing as well and the bond that poets share. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY, Juliette. I hope you like it here. I believe you will. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Am looking forward to reading more. Thanks. Love To All, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Juliette Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 13Colorado |
Thank you Enchantress. I can see many hours being spent here. I have seen your posting, a true romantic. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice first post!! Welcome to Passions!! Enjoy yourself here. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome, Juliette! It would be nice to see things new again, without and within. I enjoyed your poem. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, Juliette - This is a wonderful place, and your poetry will find a comfortable place among us. You're a talented writer, and I look forward to much more... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Juliette, and how very refreshing to have a new face as it were, that is so gifted. I truly enjoyed this piece and will look forward to reading more. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
May I also extend a warm welcome to Passions in Poetry...may you enjoy your stay... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Juliette Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 13Colorado |
Again, I want to thank all of you for your postings. They have all touched me. I look forward to getting a chance to see all of yours as well. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Juliette Thank you for sharing your well written words with us and welcome to Passions. I'll look forward to reading more from you. Sending my warmest regards across the miles. Take care Sue I am in motion |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Julitte~ Enjoyed your first post. Sort of like what you must have experienced posting here for the first time. I also send a warm welcome your way...Paul |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome. Excellent poem...look forward to more. ThisDiamond |
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