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Open Poetry #23

Another Sunny Day

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2002-10-28 04:00 AM

It was another sunny day
The birds was shining
the sun whistled through the trees
over my the head the wind chirped

It was warm in the breeze
but the sun cut through my clothes
all day long you were with me
while the rain was with me but a minute

That is how i remember it after all
but maybe my memory is not perfect

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-10-28 04:03 AM

mind if I POUNCE on this?

jeeze...

where y'been lovie?

I don't know whether to kiss you or slap ya!

(that WAS a joke...I KNOW what to do!

)

Welcome home WP....

We will clap and sing!

and hey, my memory sucks too...ooh!

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-28-2002 04:04 AM).]

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

2 posted 2002-10-28 06:45 AM

I been a long time in the cold starting to warm up a bit though for all those who remember

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-10-28 08:17 AM

I remember ...(how could I forget you)

Welcome back Paul...
stay...touch the warm of the rhymes and verse.

Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
Conamara Blues

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-26 03:26 AM

great write! Really cool ending.

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