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Save me now....
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Save me now.... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Save me now I am tired My heart is crying I am fallen deeply Please save me now I feel pain inside me I can't stand what is happening to me Thats enough I can't be as I want Save me now Before losing my love Save me.... Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) [This message has been edited by secretlife (10-29-2002 06:46 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
this is good, except I think you may have meant crying. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write... and i read it the first time as crying myself, then i saw that also. Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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