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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-10-13 08:32 AM

  Disguised amongst rolling meadows,
     glistening streams and wildflowers.
  Before majestic peaks of snow's,
     forests of green's and star showers.
  In blood red bed's of rose and thorn
     scattered like clouds of coming storms,
  possibilities, they forewarn ....
     ... as the coming maze of me forms.

         To find me - look past obstacles,
                 distractions, nature's spectacles.
         Enter me - for want more than need,
                 let me become that growing seed.
         Now have me - seek my warmth of heart,
                 absorb my endless walls and start.
         Do survive - and so accept me ...
                 a maze me ...with you, faithfully.

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2002-10-13 09:08 AM

Well, wow, you just amazed me. This is awesome and refreshing and quite creative. Like it a lot!

Warmly.
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-10-13 09:29 AM

your words do amaze, they touch the heart in so many ways.....faithfully...

ME~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-10-13 09:35 AM

Amazing write Craig...
Much enjoyed the read this morning.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

4 posted 2002-10-13 09:40 AM

The most intriguing part of a relationship, I think, finding one's way through the ever-changing twists and turns, the never-ending discovery, enjoyed!!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2002-10-13 09:48 AM

"A maze me...with you..."
Inspiring words, Craig...

...believe what your heart feels.....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-13 05:14 PM

(smiles) Oh Craig, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I think the most magical part of love is to help each other through the mazes of life! (big huggssssss) I wish you great happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2002-10-13 05:30 PM

Another beautiful write from your pen of gems Craig. Well done.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2002-11-03 04:20 PM

....just needed to be close to these words....

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-11-03 06:18 PM

I usually don't say this..but..this is one of your best..simplicity and depth...I love it

hugs
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2002-12-26 02:49 AM

deep, very expressive. I enjoyed.

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