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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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If I said yes, And gazed deep into your warm eyes and smiled, Would any of my dreams come true? Are you a wolf in sheep's clothing, Who'd corner me, devour me, And leave me just an empty shell? Would one simple word Open up a door to paradise, Or just a jagged hole to hell? If I said yes If I . . . And if I said yes, Wrapped myself around you, With contented sighs, Would you understand that it's forever? Do you play the game By a different name, Win all the pieces to leave me broken? Would one simple word Open up a door to my heart, Or just a wound I cannot heal? Finally, love, if I said yes.. Would you really still want me anyway? If I said yes, If I . . . Poetry is: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Cher... Questions most of us ponder when we know we're about to fall... head over heels in love.  ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cher darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful When I think you have reached the peak of perfection you then write something that is so perfect and full of beauty I find my heart sighing in wonder. As always darling heart your writing is exceedingly good. You of course know I adore this don’t you? Mmmmm I do! Thank you for this true delight, it is so entrancing to the soul of the reader   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Cheryl, such powerful questions fill your heart, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and wishes the best for you as you deserve the greatest happiness always! (sigh) Always follow your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cher, this is a beautiful poem with a touch of sadness. I love your poetry. I haven't seen you much lately. I hope all is well. Thanks for sharing. Love to All, Ethel |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Very nice poem with hopeful feelings. Thank you. etoodog |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
What a question!! enjoyed Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Cher, this is very well done, both in style and content. You touched on an issue male and female alike, experience, I believe, when beginning a new relationship. Allowing ourselves to be vulnerable and trust. Hard to do, but, necessary. Enjoy your poetry. Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-30-2002 09:01 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Cher, oh, I know the feeling. I suppose you have to trust your intuition as to whether you should say "yes" or not! May it all work out as you so desire! Great writing! Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...hopefully you don't have to say yes too fast...if its real it will be there for awhile...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
only one way to know for sure, I guess... |
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