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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-10-27 06:04 PM




(Re-posted for my sweet Joanna)



From The Bottom Of My Heart
By: Noah Eaton
1/29/02


My love                     for you
   Is as soft as silk             bathed in ivory
You are my angel from    my dreams heavens
You are my Madonna, who I vow to worship truly
This I promise you, my sweet lady love, to the bottom
Of my heart, to forever offer you trust and joy always and
To hold you whenever you cry and wash your tears away
With unconditional love, to be yours forever and never
Leave you, for you are all my heart desires, you are
My Guinevere, who I will always offer my true
Loyalty to you, treating you like the queen
You are to my life, from the bottom of
My heart I will promise you sweet
Love always, fondling you
With starlight and
Hope always
You and
I




"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-27-2002 06:07 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-27 06:05 PM


So pretty Noah!! You have such a loving soul. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-27 06:06 PM


This is so sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-10-27 06:40 PM


Noah - a very touching poem you've written for her. I hope all is well...

BC

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4 posted 2002-10-27 07:18 PM


Noah, this is special and I just love the heart shape. Hoping all is well with you and Joanna.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-10-27 07:28 PM


Such a graceful sculpture of the love in your heart Noah.  Too pure and beautiful to ever dim. All prayers and love to you.
ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2002-10-27 07:28 PM


Ahhh, you are such a romantic Noah!
This is just beautiful...
Love the heart shape!
~Hugs~

garysgirl
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7 posted 2002-10-27 07:31 PM


OOOOHHHHH, Noah.....you  just  KNOW  that I think this is  ABSOLUTELY   BEAUTIFUL, don't you??? I love the words...the thoughts...the love you have for your Joanna......the heart shape.....just  ALL  of it, Noah. Thanks so much for reposting it.


Love To All,
Ethel

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8 posted 2002-10-27 07:56 PM


  J

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9 posted 2002-10-27 08:03 PM


Noah, the style and content of this poem is beautuful....simply beautiful...you have such talent...I'm truly in awe..

...believe what your heart feels...

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-10-27 09:13 PM


This is gorgeous, Noah...  I love the heart shape of the poem...
You have unbelievable talent!
It was so nice to talk to you tonight and I hope you have a wonderful birthday tomorrow
~ happy birthday hugs to you, my dear young friend

Lyra

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11 posted 2002-10-27 09:17 PM


As always your words sing a majestic song and dance within the soul, Noah. Your strength is in the beautiful and unique quality of your poetics.  This should make Joanna's heart skip a beat. ***Ivy Rose
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12 posted 2002-10-27 09:42 PM


Thank you for sharing this it is truly a beautiful work Thanks!!!
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13 posted 2002-10-28 01:55 AM


It's always a pure pleasure reading what you say. Happy birthday.

etoodog

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14 posted 2002-10-29 10:56 PM


awwwwwwww, this is a classic!

SS

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15 posted 2002-10-29 10:58 PM


forgot to add to library!

SS

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16 posted 2002-10-31 04:15 AM


Enjoyed...James
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17 posted 2002-10-31 04:27 AM


This is sweet and so beautiful... enjoyed

Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

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18 posted 2002-10-31 02:53 PM


Hope she appreciate you!

Corinne

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19 posted 2002-10-31 03:47 PM


Hiiiiiii!!! I decided to peak in here and lookie what I found!
Noah, your creativity amazes me beyond belief. I love your poems, especially the ones you write for me
I know I've been gone for a while but I will try my best to come in here every so often.


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20 posted 2002-11-15 03:49 PM




Good heavens, how astounding this is, how ever did you put this into shape? Now this I like! Looking quite forward to more of your contributions!

Stanley Climbfall

garysgirl
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21 posted 2002-11-15 03:56 PM


Noah, you know that I already replid to this earlier, but it's so unique that I wanted to reply again. Just to tell you again how much I love it.
Just how did you get it in the heart shape? I bet that took a lot of work, huh?

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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22 posted 2002-11-15 04:27 PM


Hello Noah

Your poems about your love for Joanna always bring a smile to my face...simply beautiful!

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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23 posted 2002-12-14 02:00 PM


this is just TOO good!
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