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Cassie
Junior Member
since 2002-11-12
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0 posted 2002-11-13 11:43 AM


I miss you when you are gone
For you I long

I want to know your every move
Your every thought
I am sorry that we ever fought

For you have helped me to see
The real me

You have helped me to change
To be more optimistic
And realistic

You have impacted my life in such a great way
You I will obey
And to never stray away

No matter what I will never leave you
No matter what you do
I promise to always be true

Our love is one of a kind
Mended and intertwined

© Copyright 2002 Cassie - All Rights Reserved
scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
1 posted 2002-11-13 12:02 PM


beautifully written, Cassie...sounds like you're well on the way to mend a romance...I hope it works out for you..

...believe what your heart feels...

Cassie
Junior Member
since 2002-11-12
Posts 32

2 posted 2002-11-13 12:06 PM


Scorpio

Thank you for your kind words,and encouragement.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-11-15 07:44 PM


Enjoyed your soft words...James
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2002-12-14 02:00 PM


nice last lines
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