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Stating the obvious.....
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Stating the obvious..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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How many times? How many ways? Without stating the obvious Can I tell you So your heart understands Words Can’t begin to explain Emotion Ache Need Desire Lifetimes of feelings That I am not even sure I fully comprehend The depths are too deep To measure….. Could it really be so all encompassing? So simply stated? With a breathless whisper of “I love you” Perhaps……. ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Susan, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I believe love is one cliche that is always acceptable as just to say how much you love someone always is the most beautiful way! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, you have to do it. . . it's the only way. . . great work. . . good to see you back. . .  --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! I know exactly what you're saying.. Wonderful write Sue. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SEA - wonderful!! hugs to you, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - three words but so loving to hear... BC |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sometimes the words aren't necessary, but still they're very wonderful to hear. You're a true romantic, Susan. (((hugs)))The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Susan for sharing this beautifully romantic poem. I love it, naturally. Thanks. Love To All, Ethel |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well, it isn't a cinquain, but it's still lovely. JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Perhaps... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I like breathless whispers of I love you. I just don't hear them ever. Thank you. etoodog |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ahhhh, there is nothing more romantic than to hear the whisper of 'I Love You.' This was a wonderful piece. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan~ this is so beautiful sweetie...so romantic. the feelings that sometimes go with love seem so much more than the three little words "i love you" but those three words say and mean everything at the same time! just beautiful. you made me smile. thank you for that! amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
awww.... i love you too!  really though - isn't it so nice not to rhyme? |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
I've heard it said once that the poems that inspire us the most are the ones that speak directly to us, like you looked inside my soul and wrote what my muse wouldn't allow... This was beautiful.... BlueEyes |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah~ you are so wonderful, always such kindness from you! Sven~ thanks mister  Nancy~ *hugs* thank you Chris~ hugs back, and thanks! BC~ yes, and thank you Michael~ so are you sweet friend (((hugs))) Ethel~ (that's my great grandma's name, I love it) thank you very much Jamie~ I will have to write one just for you Larry~ Robert~ I can't hear them enough, thanks Marti~ thanks a bunch! Amy~ happy to make you smile!!! You are the best! Kissy Face~ I like to change it up every now and then Blue Eyes~ what a wonderful reply, thank you so much! |
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reluctantlyme Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 34 |
Not perhaps, but certainly. No matter how good looking she is... someone, somewhere is glad she's gone. |
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Morgoth Junior Member
since 2001-05-21
Posts 26Baltimore, MD |
WOW....how did I miss this one? |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
They are three simple words...by themselves they lack impact...but combind them into a "breathless whisper" and they create a powerful statement.....I+love+you=Us ...believe what your heart feels... |
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