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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-10-20 11:40 AM

please let me cry these tears
their puddles are so deep
they riddle well my soul
and rob me of sweet sleep

©October 19, 2002

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-10-20 11:41 AM

VAS,
The simple ones are the best. enjoyed.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-10-20 09:30 PM

Vas, what Sy said. And nicely done

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-20 11:15 PM

(big hugggssssss) I know this feeling too, sweet friend, I feel only crying a flood of tears without any salt to swathe my wounds is the best way to get to sleep rather than not to cry at all because you get it all out of your system like a filter! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-10-20 11:32 PM

*nods*
*smiles*

Ed

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-10-21 12:19 PM

Well this darn well moved me to tears!--Now we're both crying!

~ Sending you a shoulder to cry on ~

EA

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2002-10-21 01:55 AM

Virginia,
so cry the tears you must
from puddles deep within
they cleanse your soul
and let you begin again

A fabulous write. Exquisite in its simplicity. Tears. Can't live well without them.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-10-21 02:02 AM

Virginia, this is so true. Thank you for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2002-10-21 02:27 AM

..VAS../\..yes, good poem; very lyric..

../\..Spiros

---------------Gratitude---------

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-10-22 12:12 PM

enjoyed

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

10 posted 2002-10-29 01:30 PM

beautiful..... : )

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