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Finally, It's Over
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Finally, It's Over |
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Genuine_Canadian_Man Junior Member
since 2002-10-07
Posts 11Timmins, Ontario, Canada |
This is my first poem ever. I wrote is an entry into a Remeberance Day Poetry Contest and I won first prize. FINALLY, IT'S OVER My thoughts were trule empty, From all the grief and fear, The war is Finally over, Finally! Although the was has ended, So much painful memories, Run through my now filled mind, The War is finally over, Finally! Joy had filled the air, As it all finally ended, The war is finally over, Finally! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I wish for this ever so much to happen all across the world, I'm so happy they caught that sniper around Washington and I wish for us all to embrace in harmony, this is a wonderful debut, congratulations on the first prize, this is so deserving of it, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Canadian friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-25-2002 06:57 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions... an excellent entrance. Hope to read more of your works. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome, GCM, to Passions! I am looking forward to more of your first posts...if this is a start, then we are about to view a wealth, aren't we! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome!!!!!! Wonderful piece of poetry to start off with. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Very nicely done first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 I know you are going to think this forum wins first place on the internet too! Enjoyed and welcome aboard. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Even though I welcomed you in the other poem, I want to do it again....WELCOME!!! I hope that you enjoy it here as much as I have this past month. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing with us. Love to All, Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to this peaceful poetry place, where we make love (ususally platonic) not war (most of the time) May ripples of LOVE |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to this peaceful poetry place, where we make love (usually platonic) not war (most of the time) OK, so I stuttered.  [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-25-2002 11:46 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
 TOPIPI hope you learn to love it as much as we do! Hope to hear more of your poetry |
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