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Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

0 posted 2002-10-25 01:30 PM

Witness the color of leaves turned
The swelling chill and firewood burned
Signs of harvest-time are all these
Summer's forgotten, Fall's relearned.

Watch out for the season's first freeze
Spy graying skies above the trees
Sleepy Autumn, she yawned and yearned
Her winds caress with frigid breeze.

Blaring Sun, your features mellow
Blinding gold to burnished yellow
Weakened, yet still eager to please
Instead of Hark! -you say Hello.

As Autumn grows old, warmth we'll miss
While clouds pucker for frosty kiss
And the heavens will then bellow
Fulfillment of Winter's promise.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-25 01:37 PM

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

2 posted 2002-10-25 03:18 PM

Thank you for you kind comment!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-10-25 05:05 PM

What a lovely Autumn poem.

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2002-10-25 05:09 PM

This is the first of your work I've read...and it's very well done....

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

5 posted 2002-10-25 07:58 PM

Lots of nice autumn images. I liked " Spy graying skies above the trees" Thank you.

etoodog

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-25 09:53 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, I just see Winter as the time where our strength and faith is re-fueled and He promises spring will come again as we learn to train our hearts to love and share, God Bless You, may the harvest of this season bring you great smiles, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2002-10-25 10:56 PM

~falls relearned~ I like that so much. The entire poem is pleasing.
Really, very lovely.

Thanks,

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-10-25 10:59 PM

This is a really nice poem. Very peaceful feel. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

9 posted 2002-10-26 01:27 AM

Morcastlin...Wonderful poem and gorgeous imagery. What an exquisite way to view the Autumn colors and the Fall season of change.
***Ivy Rose

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

10 posted 2002-10-26 07:51 AM

Very lovely Autumn poem. Enjoyed very much!

Deb

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

11 posted 2002-10-26 07:55 AM

This is so lovely, the clouds puckered for an icy kiss! WOW
Take care
Liz

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