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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-25 10:15 AM

Unfinished Composition

watercolors
oils and such
feathered by
the stroke of touch
brushed on
canvassed time
hues placed
that are prime
unorganized lines
in slots
people and places
connecting dots
paint that dried
in-between
chaos first
then patterns seen

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-25 11:46 AM

Helen...beautifully written...as is every poem of yours I've read. Thanks for sharing.

Love to All,
Ethel

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-25 12:38 PM

Very beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-25 10:25 PM

(sigh) And may each day a new color be added to this canvas of life and the masterpiece continue to be painted till eternity in loves splendor! (kiss on cheek) This is exquisite, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-10-25 10:34 PM

Yes, and this applies to poetry or painting. (acrylics so much better than oil,(for me) much easier to fix those patterns, as needed ( big, big smile)

and I always write poetry with a big
eraser on end of pencil for very same reasons.

Love your poetry.....

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (10-25-2002 10:38 PM).]

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

5 posted 2002-10-26 04:02 AM

Being a digital artist myself, I can deeply apreciate this very perceptive and well- written poem's description of the artistic process leading from chaos to order.

Very nice!
Thanks for sharing!

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

6 posted 2002-10-26 06:23 AM

searching forward
looking back
what is missing
what does it lack?
You ask questions
that ask for more
and only the blind
would ever ignore

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