Open Poetry #23 |
Dragonfly |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A Dragonfly of windless wings, an emptiness which lost love brings ... If meant to fly such love will soar and live for years, lost nevermore. But time does tell and takes its toll when air goes stale and starves the soul. With fierceness of what hearts know, reluctantly, we face, let go ... Dragonfly by legends born, search forever for love that's sworn. Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 [This message has been edited by ctowen (10-25-2002 11:49 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ctowen, very descriptive poem, I like it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Yes! We soar so high don't we? Seems as if nothing can disturb such a high. Then suddenly no more lift. As in a vacuum we plunge straight down to the depths of despair. That's why we have to be careful for whom we decide to fly that way. Enjoyed the imagery! God bless. Thanks for sharing! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, may you always embrace the simple pleasures and loves of life like that dragonfly and soar with a smile of grace, this is lively, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
I like the style ..... I think I understand the author to mean that love without a place to light is like a flightless dragonfly ... Yes ? ... and they sent him home happy ... one hundred percent. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Deep inside the stillness |
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