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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-30 05:22 PM

Purest Breath

I have died
a thousand deaths
to finally breathe
the purest breath
once stood grounded
in disappointments line
gently cradling feathered
dreams that were mine
hope once forgotten
now finds a rooted seed
producing the substance
on which a soul can feed
uncovered secrets sweet
found in me deep within
this has taken my life
and sets it free to fly again

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-10-30 06:56 PM

helen - fly free, fly free, you've earned it...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-30 08:03 PM

(smiles) Inhale a hope, exhale a new blessing! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, always let your spirit soar, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 2002-10-31 08:49 AM

Excellent poem.
When we are free to fly life seems to be so much more easy to deal with. Yet the challenges we face in life are relevent to reaching our flight patterns. Thanks for sharing your talent here with us.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2002-10-31 04:37 PM

fly baby fly!!!!!!!!1
enjoyed
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (10-31-2002 04:39 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-31 04:38 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-10-31 05:49 PM

Lovely...James

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-10-31 10:10 PM

helen - breath of pure, heart of soft, yes I do know the feeling...

BC

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

8 posted 2002-11-02 05:33 AM

"gently cradling feathered dreams"

I love this line, it is all so very fragile.
Enjoyed!

Denea Furr
Junior Member

since 2002-11-03

Posts 31
Indiana

9 posted 2002-11-03 04:57 PM

I really liked this one Helen you obviously are a great poet. I look forward to reading more of your work. BeAuTiFuL.

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