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In your Heart
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In your Heart |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
I stand, to walk Your eyes on me I bend, to talk Your ears to hear You sigh, to know This love, so dear And you capture Rapture Entrapped Enwrapped The kisses Are yours |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is wonderful! I like the way you did it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elan, Enjoyed this very much. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Elan...VERY, VERY, NICE!!!! Beautiful thoughts and beautiful words. ***Ivy Rose |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooh, I really like this!! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elan!! So good to see you here again... Please don't stay away so long... You KNOW how much I love your writing! This piece is exquisite! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love how you thoughts flow so smmothly, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
as fragile as a crystal figurine...and as lovely  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Or as delicate as a pearl. Howdy Neighbour |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Crystal chandeliers could not induce such wonder as this. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kisses seem to be the thing today....Yep! And ya done really kissy with this one... Thanx Elan...enjoyed... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a unique and special little love poem! EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Elan, as most of you probably know by now (if you've read any of my poems), I simply love to write and read "love poems". This was very well done and I love the way you put it on paper. Thanks for sharing. With Love To All, Ethel |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
The simplicity of this had me entranced. So much so that i love it despite the rhyming... maybe (and don't tell JM this) it even made it better. Peace Chris |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elan - and this is a very romantic poem you've written... BC |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a very romantic poem. I love the soft way you presented it as well. Dawn |
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