Open Poetry #23 |
Ghost Cat (Post for Halloween) |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
(I will repost this on Halloween. But I wanted to see what you thought of it now. I hope you like it. Remember it is just a story.) An in-mate from jail Adopted a cat And decided to kill it Little did he know That this little ball of fur Was going to come back And get revenge Now 4 years later On the night before halloween The man heard weird noises Like a cat meow he knew he killed that cat Years ago But he thought to himself "Did the cat fake it?" He went about his business And then he saw The cat he killed 4 years ago appear He couldn't believe his eyes The cat glared at the man And with one pounce Was on the man The next morning The mans friend walked in The cat disappeared And the in-mate was dead His death was unsolved But we know what happened The cat that died Got his revenge And that was all Cold hands means a warm heart |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is a very creepy tale, especially for a kitty kicker. Maybe I should heed the warnings. Whatta ya think? n-a-w-w-w-w-w. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nice and spooky. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I guess he got what he deserved! ~Sheri |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Poor widdle ghost kitty |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I find it horrible how people can do such things to poor innocent creatures like that! (sigh) This is indeed a horrific poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - the ghost cat returned, nice tale for Halloween... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Once upon a hard time An itsy bitsy, teeny weeny Little cat named Halloweeny Bit the hand that Didn't feed her She left him in a prison cell And there she left him --Dead as well !!! EA |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And the moral is.................... Don't ever kill a kitty... A cute Halloween tale, Julie ~ hugs and spooks Lyra |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Awesome! What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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