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Body Talk: Afterhours
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Body Talk: Afterhours |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As the sun has set and the moon's full rise has captured my mood, in the blue of your eyes. The silken of feel, as my body's in talk in silence, enjoying the fingers that walk crossing above and below of the dark, the richness of cream, tattooing your mark. Delicious the taste of the message, your treat, my favorites vanilla, but it's your choice of sweet. After the hours when all's put to bed, it is then that the flavor, I change to be red. Oh the wildness of berry, soothed in it's spread, your touch after hours, my feel, words unsaid. No need to be spoken when hands produce words, that massage mind and ego, afterhours preferred.  M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Maureen, whether it's in a lovers touch, a mothers hug or a friends holding of your hand, simple touches can mean so much and say all that needs to be said to satisfy ones needs! (big hugggsssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart as always the lightness and delicate touch of your words scatter thoughts of exquisite love and heat. When you wrtite you always manage to do so with style and grace This really is exquisite writing and of course you know I utterly utterly utterly love it darling heart it is fabulous   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully sensual Maureen.. Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A wonderful taste of sensuality, beautifully written, Maureen  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Your clarity of purpose and soothing invitations tell it all yet, somehow I feel like guessing. Thank you. etoodog |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I love the romantic sensual "feel" of this poem. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nice to see you posting regularly again, Maureen, and thank you for this nice treat.  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
sensually romantic lovely write Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah, your responses are a delight thank you M I thank you for your encouragement Marsha...and yes I was in a bit of a teasing mood with this one Nancy, thank you, I enjoyed writing this one. Lyra, how are you doing..I think about you often and David, too... remembering the nice lunch we shared. hugging you gently M Robert, yes I was "inviting" thank you M Ethel, thank you for stopping to respond, I appreciate it and you. ~smiling M Michael, I am glad you enjoyed my tasty little treat..I was challenged to write about food and poetry...any style and format. I hope I did it justice Bernie, I tried my best to get that across, thank you M |
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