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Debussy's Daydream Vistas
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Debussy's Daydream Vistas |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
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Debussy's Daydream Vistas Debussy's daydream vistas are heralded events compelling chaine-quest visions, violin transitions and crossroad cello-strings Musical meanderings, a poetic flute running rampant in my mind Young girl says she wants to be La belle au bois dormant Sleeping Beauty ballerina "I'll study with Aurora's famous ballet troupe transmigrate to the bustling city, so far away from home." She gazes deep into her lover's dark brown eyes He runs his fingers through the softness of her flaxen hair, then reaches out to touch her trembling cheeks and lips Her private dance is just for him, pretends she's winged cologne the lingering lasting kiss of Perfume In The Night He stares, then visualizes a winter solstice frame, the feast of Saturnalia Boreas blowing forth his frosty northern winds Her sparkling eyes, bright orbs aglitter, aureate silver mined from the cratered moon Around her neck a riviere, countless sequins, dazzling angels on her skin Holds fast to her elusive hands, he says," I'll be right by your side paint movements of fluidity, immortalized for all the world to see." But the arbitrary fates of arabesque are inclined to watch her contredanse Drenched in pirouetting charnel, spinning velvet, soul aflame Filled with lost love's sorrow, she wears the blackened dress of death to honor Charon's name Piano melodies are bittersweet, a taste that's carved from life and living I'm not ashamed if tears begin to fall, because I'm all alone, but never lonely I drink my endless cups of French-roast coffee and write the way I feel No abstract points or curtain calls as I sip on peace and solitude [This message has been edited by WhileIWasGone (10-24-2002 02:23 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
intellegent and filled with imagery... excellent read woven well for anyone that wants to think.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhileIWasGone An excellent palette and a pretty picture, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Etoile, What a beauty, to be greeted with this morning. (The poetry, is in direct reflect) ti amo Ed |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful poem this is. Thanks for sharing your feelings and thoughts with us this morning. Love To All, Ethel |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Thank you all for reading and the kind replies... DeaDiAmore |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Why be Sleeping Beauty when you are already La fille avec les cheveux de Flaxen? Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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