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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-10-23 09:42 PM

“CAPTIVATING CHARM”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When we were on the mountain
top all my eyes could do was
gaze at you, as you stood there
looking at the river below winding
its way through the valley...

I could only admire your
beauty with your hair
flowing in the cool breeze,
your face radiant in the
sun, and your eyes sparkling
only as they can…

I held you close, felt your
captivating charm, and my
broken heart mended,
then melted within...
~~~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-10-23 09:59 PM

Magical Bill...lovely write..
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-23 10:26 PM

(sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may your heart always mend with the beauty of true love! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely and sentimental, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

3 posted 2002-10-23 11:06 PM

This was wonderful. Thank you.

Kielo

I don't care if you're an old fart, because old people are smarter than me.

-Me. (reply in the Alley)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-10-23 11:14 PM

BC ~

I love the mountains, but all we have are hills where I live---but there are some magnificent hilltops! I'm an avid hiker and I seek out the highest ones with the greatest views. I raise my arms up to the sky and shout, "I'm the queen of the world!"
hehe I love nature and some of my most memorable loving moments have been out in nature and feeling at one with it!

Sounds like you have had several wonderful and loving moments as well---on many a mountain top!

EA

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-10-23 11:16 PM

A melody within a melody here...lifted me to great heights. ThisDiamond

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-10-24 02:42 AM

Bill, this is SOOO romantic and beautiful. I love it.
Love To All,
Ethel

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

7 posted 2002-10-24 06:47 AM

..Bill Charles../\..yes, very nice;

thank you../\..Spiros

--------------------enjoyed------

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

8 posted 2002-10-24 06:48 AM

What a sweet happy poem!!!

Neeraja

Blue Kitty
Member

since 2002-08-05

Posts 72
Virginia

9 posted 2002-10-24 09:24 AM

Nice to know some men’s eyes don’t wander, but if you go driving keep your eyes on the road. Although if it were me, I wouldn’t mind if you pulled over every now and then to look or something. Liked your poem bunches.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2002-10-24 11:06 AM

Bill, I have such a love of mountains and I'm always charmed by your words when you write about being on your mountain.

This is wonderful, thank you...

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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