Open Poetry #23 |
O Muse....If Only, Just Once |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Inspired by Sunshine and Rilke...thank you both... O muse of heart who holds the quill with hands now worn, too tired to write. O muse of mind please come to be these words unfound on moonless night. I whisper from modest refrain as shame of self turns down my head. I call with lips that utter not, my feet won’t move, with heavy lead. O muse, please lend to this tired man a hand in grasp to stand yet tall. My wish to be a poet, my plan before the leaves of Autumn fall. To be a poet, not just a pen and share one's soul, a tear and heart. O muse of mine, to have this then become my name till death does part. [This message has been edited by Magnus (10-14-2002 12:09 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am...speechless. And now I have to go find a word that fits... this masterpiece. That's it. I'm hanging up my pen. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Exquisite! Wonderful Barry, simply wonderful. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - no need to look, you are a poet and a good one at that/// BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nay!...sayeth the Lord's knight to thee. For...thee art the blood raging... the rivers roaring, winds whispering through leaves, the beam of yon moon... Thee art the SUN... ------------------------------------- Thanx Anne, appreciate your thoughts... |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
I think you've succeeded by golly, and even before autumn, this was wonderful. Kudos to your muse. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well, it looks to me like you are a mighty fine poet. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...What a scrumptious poem!!! Befits the tremendous talent you possess. The Muse has graced your life with a poet's spell. ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, I'm so glad that I went to the back pages tonight to see what I missed over the weekend. If I hadn't, I might have not found this wonderful poem you wrote. Thank you for sharing it. With love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful...Enjoyed much. DeaDiAmore |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
ahhhhh this is the tender muse and the one who we all love so much...you amaze... hugs to the muse and man, Cher Poetry is: |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You surely are more than a pen a poet sir within my ken. So write your wares and write them fine, your words hold muse in every line. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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