Open Poetry #23 |
To Taste Each Curve of You..........repost |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
If I kiss my hand and press it to your lips, will you feel the warmth, the wetness, taste and feel the heat of my breath? If I could give you a real kiss, but I know how hard it would be to stop at just a kiss. I want more and always have. Did you know that of me? Do you know how much I've longed to taste each curve of you, to trace your form with my very breathing? One night when it was late I knocked on your door to say hello. You answered and invited me in. You were dressed in a translucent blue gown that fell to your feet. At times, the light would fall upon it just right and it became transparent. Oh my... Being friends, you excused your immodesty. My eyes could not help but explore your blushing skin beneath. My throat felt parched. I wanted you then, more than you could realize. I want you now. I can't get that night out of my mind. May I kiss you? [This message has been edited by Auguste (10-23-2002 05:50 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely write..and a heartfelt thought behind it.... good stuff my friend... now..you go trying to kiss me though..and we'll have a problem. I never can figure out which way to turn my head so I don't bump noses.. ( laughing) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Unrequited love can be bitter sweet. The longing titillates the mind and flushes the body. You write of this yearning so well. EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh dang Michael! You do write 'sensuous' very well indeed. My cheeks are flushed! Enjoyed this so much.. ~Settle for a big hug?~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Michael, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love it, I am so happy you reposted this as every word you write is filled with heart and beauty! (big hugggssssss) May this love always shine in you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
ohh..my goodness! what an image you have weaved for me Consider yourself fuzzed |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well, there you go again! If you don't knock off this breathing stuff I will soon need to get an oxygen tank in here. Surely, you are a well-rounded poet, so nice to see this senuous side of your talent. You have a way of capturing the moment! Very nicely done. Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Cpat, Believe me, I'd never try kissing you. LOL Thanks you for reading. Linda, Hey, I try...and I do so appreciate your replies. Nancy, I flushed your cheeks? Woohooooooo!! LOL Thanks, sweetie. *hugs* Chris, Thank you for enjoying this, Chris. It's so nice to see you here. Noah, Thank you! I tend to love romance...seems like it's just so hard to find anymore. Fuzzy, Sooooooo...does that mean you like it? LOL! Thanks! Pat, Hmmm...is that a challenge? LOL! Hey, great to see you here. So love seeing a reply of yours on my work. Thank you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmm..Michael, pip just doesn't want to accept my response to you, third try now.. I was posting that this should almost be in the adult section..but then I would have missed reading it and the feelings it evokes ~smiling M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Shivers... ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michael, this is just beautiful. I love all the poetry you write. Thanks for sharing with us. Love To All, Ethel |
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