Open Poetry #23 |
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The Roaring Train |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada ![]() |
you're not here today and my body is hungry for your kisses please do not be offended if I pretend that this book I'm writing in, is your body; here, to please me Oh, my love, I kiss you and kiss you softly and methodically, at first but now, my heart; my love I am slightly losing control my kisses have become the products of a speeding freight train; each spark of a thousand roaring steel wheels, is a kiss there are more sparks -more kisses- than I can count O my heart, my only, please tell me you feel; you felt my going crazy for you on this page **** **** **** ..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris ..poem archived in several other sites |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it. All the feeling and emotion. Well done Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..the_loner_23../\..thanks for reading; i appreciate the kind words../\..Spiros -------------calm seas---------- |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Spiros, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, such passion fills your wonderful words, I love the magic you conjure to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Mistletoe Angel../\..thanks for reading; you are very kind../\..Spiros ---------------twilight----- |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Spiros, being this incurable romantic that I am....this is my favorite type poem. It was beautiful and I loved it. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..garysgirl../\..thank u; very kind of u to read and comment../\..Spiros ------------poetry------- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderfully done! [This message has been edited by Martie (10-24-2002 08:50 PM).] |
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