Open Poetry #23 |
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Death Underneath |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
I spent some time in Wisconsin when I lost my mind, and went up there searching for it. Up there in the freezing cold in a place with no hot water, no curtains, no frills. Just a roof overhead, to keep out the chills. And it was there in the midst of insanity's escape, that I saw majestic, upon the frozen landscape, an eagle, quite bald, by the side of the road. You know they're not bald they've feathers up there. Here sat this bird in the middle of nowhere not really just sitting, he was busy indeed, on carcass of deer did this royalty feed. Still the picture, of eagle alight so close to a place, within my eyesight was spendid in spite of the death underneath. WhiteRose "my reflection becomes me" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You captured a magical moment of life and the cycle of life. Well done Anne!! This is quite good! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is wonderful. Everything was expressed well Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Beauty indeed is often relative to the perspective taken... nicely written.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
WhiteRose A magnificant creature, partly because of his power...well done. Brought to mind the fact, that death is always there, under life. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, I love the way you brought the majestic creature...the bald eagle...out of a seemingly(??) sad situation of you "losing your mind" and your "searching for it". I hope you are satisfied that you found it? Thanks for sharing this poetry with us. Love To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Anne, I love this, sweet friend, I love how you describe your wistfulness and contrast it with the eagle almost like chiarascuro! (kiss on cheek) Know the hope and freedom can outshine any opposing force, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..WhiteRose../\..yes, well-written; enjoyed reading../\..Spiros -----------------------trees--- |
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