Open Poetry #23 |
Timeless |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Wearing the Mem'ries I awake mornings with softness, in feel from nighttime dreaming, intensely of real. The blue of your eyes, I'm dressed in today, wearing the feeling of mem'ries this way. Do you believe, in my thoughts I express? The wants, the desires inside me compress to the fill of my heart, to overflow, seep, 'til I'm wearing the mem'ries, inside that I keep. Years have been passing too quickly for me, yet times end is never, when you have the key that can unlock those feelings, set free those restraints loosen those chains, with the words that mind paints... You coat me with warmth, in blue memory, Left behind, mixed with mine, stitched in timeless of we. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Enjoyed the flow of this and its sweet, tender texture. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely.... may the blue of your day be the clear sky... and the key found again to unlick your dreams |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Virginia..and hey C.... did you really mean "unlick"? made me laugh at that slip of the keys... hugss M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well now... not sure that wasn't a freudian slip... always thought it odd he wore slips and they named them after him... and him..supposed to be telling the rest of us what was wrong with us... I'll tell you! Put him on one of the talk shows today and in a slip and see how many busts of him are displayed... well I guess if he wore a slip, busts might indeed also be shown... oh.. What was I saying.... oh yeah... nope didn't mean to type unlick... should have just been lick... that un part wasn't needed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wish you could be beside me right now and hear me laughing..I rarely laugh aloud..but this whole response just broke me up..and I can't stop myself... haaa too funny, C M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
oh my... I was funny? Must have been a total accident..I was being serious you know... darn... when I try to be funny I'm not, when I don't try people think I am... what a catch 22... Glad I could give you a chuckle.... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'm glad I happened up this, Maureen. So tenderly written, so heartfelt. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, One of your best, enjoyed. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I've never "unlicked" anything myself?...But, I'm willing to try? This is very well done gal... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you always write with your heart... BC |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed your writing as always Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Maureen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you always write from the heart and I know these blue skies will beckon for you as long as you hold to heart! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maureen...this has got to be your best write ever! Enjoyed ever so much! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write from the heart and to the heart... and I felt every word. Stunning as always~ Hugging you Maureen~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Auguste, I have great inspiration always, Michael. Thank you ~smiling M (I love your signature) Sy, you think so? then I am pleased you read it and responded. Thank you Toerag "I've never "unlicked" anything myself?...But, I'm willing to try?" Haaa..I am not sure who makes me laugh more, you or C Thank you M Bill, yes I am much like you... hugsss M Bernie, I enjoy your reading and responding to me. Thank you ~smiling~ M Noah Dear, where do you find the time to respond to almost everyone. Thank you for always being here. hugss Maureen Nancy, I am glad you think so. hugs and Thank you Lori, I wish I could catch up with you, but I have had company (the whole family together at one time..a first in years...so I am taking a brief moment to respond and thank you for always sharing your heart with me. huggssss M |
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