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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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It's muzak to his kind. Hear it, in his footstep stomp-- see the clutter in confine? Boxes filled to point of bust-- a treasury of a troll's trust. Upon the throne I sit in pomp and circumstance--do what I must? [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-23-2002 04:28 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
He likes a lot of noise in life. It's muzak to his kind. Hear it, in his footstep stomp-- ================================= I knew "who" as soon as I read the first line. you write every view brilliantly with your rhymes and symbols...I just wish it was fiction.  love ya KA mothyme |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
just a piece...inventoried... He hunts in lust. I gather dust. as I lose my mind... Man, Karen this is powerful, really I am speechless by the power of this HUGS. The ladders of life that we scale merrily Move mysteriously around So that when you think you're climbing up, man In fact you're climbing down-Nick ca |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sometimes I wonder if poems are slow sheddings of the mind. Well, I'm glad to have found this piece. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I'm glad this was bumped back up here. It was a delight, as is all your work. Thanks for sharing. Love to All, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How delightful! Thanks to Mikey for popping this back up! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I am so sorry for the reason for this poem. I wish that Toerag would leave you gals alone! BTW - This poem is very well written. |
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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
"I gather dust" is my favorite line...really liked this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Karen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your words always hold so much emotion in them and entertaining to read, this is mighty, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
let me try this again. I was just trying to say "thank you..." hmmm... 0000-kay? I apologize for not reading and replying as I normally would, but, and I type this again, I just can't get the hang of patting my head and rubbing my tummy at the same time... I can sing and blow bubbles tho...grin.. Thanks again? |
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