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Dancing on the Lawn...
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Dancing on the Lawn... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Sometimes in the still of night, ...beyond the din of day, Faeries dance upon the lawn, ...and in the garden play, A unicorn plays hide and seek, ...amongst the daffodils, With a pair of porcupines, ...watch out for their quills, All alone the tortoise sits, ...waiting for the hare, From within his tortoise shell, ...knock, knock, are you there? Up in a tree a hoot owl hoots, ...as a bat flies by, Flying backward loop-de-loops, ...across a starlit sky, Then from the east a kiss of pink, ...first hint of new day's dawn, As sunlight dances with the dew, ...across an empty lawn. [This message has been edited by Tim (10-22-2002 10:46 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I absolutely adore this. this is wonderful and such fun to read. Thank you so much, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely delightful! I love the flow and rhythm. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
This was so sweet and loved the way your words just flowed. I'm glad I stopped by for the read. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
this is great. makes me want to paint something to go with it! |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
 This was wonderful! Thank you!Kielo |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
 Wonderful poem! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only have you written a beautiful poem with rhythm and imagery, you captured my imagination and filled me with delight. Thank you, Tim! Linda |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tim, I could almost see the little fairies, unicorns, and the little critters you mentioned, just dancing around on these pages of blue. This was delightful. Thanks for sharing.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love the fantasy you paint in your words, sweet friend, I love unicorns and faeries so much and wish hey really did exist like this on the lawns everywhere! (big hugggssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely charming, Tim! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim The deer like statues stood and watched the dance was such delight and as the sun swallowed the dark there grace was part of light [This message has been edited by Martie (12-02-2002 11:09 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very lovely view you gave us, Tim *s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tim Charming a delight to read. |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
very beautiful poem, tim; i adored it The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So glad to see this back at the top...I'm going to share this with some wee little ones I know... |
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