Open Poetry #23 |
Lullaby Soft |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“LULLABY SOFT” ~~~~ Breezes caress the rain on your face which sings of melodies, words flow with your lullaby soft, as I read unknown verses… ~~~~ by Bill Charles |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, such breezes always fill your lovely words, may your love always be the wind beneath your wings carrying you to the heights of heavens! (big hugggssssss) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BC~ every word is perfect...it's gentle and soothing....LOVED this one!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Bill ~ Hugs! ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful... Enjoyed this so much.... DeaDiAmore |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Written with heart and soul, Bill...wonderful words crafted to touch...softly. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Wasn't the Moody Blues that said: And the sound we make together Is the music to the story in your eyes It's been shining down upon me now I realize" If it is possible for a lullabye to cry, it would weep joytears at the sound of your voice, reciting lyrics of the heart. Jeff [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (10-21-2002 10:39 PM).] |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...There is such a gentleness in this poem. Sings a lullabye of love through time and unknown verse. Truly beautiful...as it always is. ***Ivy Rose [This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (10-22-2002 11:46 PM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
soft...sky...lullaby...helen |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
enjoyed Consider yourself fuzzed |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Lovely! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, another of those beautiful poems written in such few words. Thanks for sharing your heart, sweet Bill. Love To All, Ethel |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Laying verse aside to listen to the rain just to hear you, again |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words are as soft and sweet as a baby's breath. EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - this is so lovely!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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