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Open Poetry #23

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Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

0 posted 2002-10-21 07:50 PM

fathom
Clear
nearby
Autumn
Blush
Leaf
home
Kiss
rush
Tea

etoodog

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

1 posted 2002-10-21 08:06 PM

slow down, man
enjoy the trip

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-10-21 08:17 PM

Hi there this is very very interesting I really think you’ve worked on this, it is I think very deep

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-10-21 08:26 PM

Hi Robert...
Interesting piece..sometimes fewer words say more.
My favourite words are the ones with Capitals.

~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2002-10-21 08:48 PM

i like your style

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-21 08:55 PM

Robert, I may not understand this completely, but it is different. Different is good. It's very interesting. I liked it. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
Love To All,
Ethel...garysgirl

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-21-2002 08:56 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-21 10:02 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Robert, this fathomas with such beauty and whimsical grace, sweet friend, I love it, may this autumn bring you great blessings, you bring such light to these pages, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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