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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-10-12 01:41 PM

Instinctively inside to be
Another moments destiny
The inner dwell of
Soft dark well
To contemplate
Of mystery

Of mystery
To contemplate
Soft dark well
The inner dwell of
Another moments destiny
Instinctively inside to be

Copyright Kkh 10/12/02

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-12 01:47 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-10-12 01:49 PM

Not bad...almost makes you think of a mirrored
reflection of a thought.....or inside,
looking out...like the creativeness...

Nicely done K. Fight on, fight on!

and yes, I realize...after reading the title...
that it is supposed to be an echo.....pretty
crafty kiddo....pretty crafty....

[This message has been edited by Magnus (10-12-2002 02:57 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-12 02:52 PM

(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love how this reflects and mirrors your soul, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

4 posted 2002-10-12 03:22 PM

ThisDiamond...I know, I know, it's been awhile. But this poem is a prime example of why I have missed your poetry so much. So clever in its echoing words. Wonderful poem!!!! ***Ivy Rose

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-10-12 04:54 PM

Yes...an anapoem...

LOL...

isn't it amazing
what a few good lines
reveal?

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-10-12 08:04 PM

ThisDiamond - Extremely clever the way you wrote this. I'm very impressed.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-10-12 08:36 PM

Awesome!! I really enjoyed this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-10-12 09:53 PM

thisdiamond - clever write, nice echos...

BC

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