I Fill My Pen - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-20 11:22 PM

I Fill My Pen

tonight I fill
my pen
with the liquid
of my heart
and I spill
across blank pages
a drop
of blood here
a smear of
soul there
be it
burning agony
or my
secret confessions
to ache
in his love
tonight I fill
my pen
with the liquid
of my heart

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-20 11:24 PM

Beautiful words

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-20 11:26 PM

(smiles) And you always pour your heart out with such grace and comeliness, sweet friend, wonderful liquid thoughts always are painted straight from the golden well of your heart, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-10-20 11:30 PM

Heartache transcribed

Nice.

Ed

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-10-20 11:34 PM

Helen,

I love this! Makes me feel just right. A true poet's poem about writing poetry.

Does that make sense

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-20 11:42 PM

Helen, this is an excellent work you have done of describing how a poet must feel when writing a poem. Thank you for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2002-10-21 07:18 AM

We all ache

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2002-10-21 07:25 AM

Some ache, some just pretend,
Some write of emotion
Some write emotionally,
Your words undoubtedly come from an emotional heart
Please keep the pen filled
And write.

Gloom

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

8 posted 2002-10-21 10:04 AM

Beautiful! I agree this is a lovely emotive write!
Thanks for sharing it, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.