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Open Poetry #23

Erosion

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-20 10:56 PM

I am conscious
of the wearing away
of myself.

The erosion,
the crumbling

each peice
a little bigger

forming the precipice

and now
I find myself
falling.

WhiteRose

"my reflection becomes me"

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-20-2002 10:57 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-20 10:58 PM

This is awesome. I know how this feels. I really do.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-20 11:06 PM

(sigh) Sometimes I can feel myself eroding this way too, where like an earthquake the ground beneath me starts to crumble and I fall into various emotions rendered in the moraine of reactions! (big hugggssssss) This is well-expressed, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!