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H.E.A.R.T.B.R.E.A.K.
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H.E.A.R.T.B.R.E.A.K. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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H is for the hate that I felt when you left me E was for eternal, until you went away A is for another lonely night that I have spent, waiting for you to come back R is for a rational reason that you left me in the cold T is for the torture that I go through every day B is for bad, because thats what leaving me was! R is also for Red, because thats the color that this poem is, and that's the color I saw when I found out what was going on E is for every ounce of pain you caused me A is for all of the other people who are likeyou K doesn't stand for anything, because I couldn't think of a bad enough word that starts with a K (This is only a poem, I wrote it for people who know the feeling, because thankfully I don't) |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Then I can say you wrote it for me. Because I've felt it. Very nicely done. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is very heartachingly powerful, sweet friend, I have known this feeling and my heart goes out to all who have also and wish for comfort to alleviate the pain, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I have felt these feelings 3 times before Liam. Very good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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