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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-10-20 08:01 AM

Beyond the Wall

I see the past in ghostly sigh
It sweeps before my inner eye.
It waves to me in phantom play
And asks me, would I like to stay?

It offers me a grail of think
The fluid is a moment’s drink.
A fantasy a realm of seem
Not quite real yet not quite dream.

It plays upon the heart of me
And steeps like an exotic tea.
Euphoria the nectars taste
Since ecstasy was the base.

And I float away into the sky
To touch upon the things of sigh
And happiness brings hidden joy
Like a child with new found toy.

It is a place within us all.
It’s just beyond the doubters wall.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-10-20 08:08 AM

How like a good memory to be the anesthesia for so much around us that we would wipe out with one thought of something from yesterday that made us smile...

and how like you to be my morning sigh....

Thank you

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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2 posted 2002-10-20 08:18 AM

Thank you, Seymour, for this work. It's beautiful, as always. It was good to read this morning. Thanks.

Love To All,
Ethel

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

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3 posted 2002-10-20 08:19 AM

I especially enjoy this poem. It causes me to grin ear to ear and causes me to reflect.

And the line...
"The fluid is a moment's drink"
is brilliant. Love it!

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-10-20 08:55 AM

Sunshine,
You are shining bright this moerning.

Ethel,
Good morning and thank you dear.

Pat,
Lovely comment, thank you.

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15

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land of flora and fauna

5 posted 2002-10-20 08:56 AM

A soft, gentle journey into sighland, enjoyed!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-10-20 08:59 AM

Sandpiper
A soft and gentle reply, thank you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-10-20 09:04 AM

Much enjoyed this morings offering Sy love..
now I think I shall brew some exotic tea.
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-10-20 09:08 AM

Enchantress
A lovely idea, good morning dear.

Nightshade

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just out of reach

9 posted 2002-10-20 09:45 AM

Seymour - meet ya beyond the wall !!! Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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10 posted 2002-10-20 10:03 AM

It offers me a grail of think
The fluid is a moment's drink.
======================================

and those will be my winkie-way-cool-lines for the day.

Did some one say there was tea????

By the way...Randy is still here..drinking all me raspberry tea...after he ate all the chips and beer LOL

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-10-20 11:06 AM

Chris,
So glad you got there. Thank you.

JM,
Tell Randy he better get his tail back home or else. WWS

Martie

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12 posted 2002-10-20 11:46 AM

Good morning, Sy

with your words.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2002-10-20 11:50 AM

Martie,
Good morning butterfly.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

14 posted 2002-10-20 11:56 AM

Lovely texture to this....it seems it would be quite fitting to use "Sy" in place of "sigh."

LOL

Enjoyed!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2002-10-20 11:58 AM

VAS,
You could be right. LOL Thank you.

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC

16 posted 2002-10-20 02:34 PM

SY,

awesome poem! i loved every line of this...
your work is always so rich with wonder.
and u know that you've mentioned tea, i
know a certain "moths" whose attention
you've got lol. take care my friend
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Mistletoe Angel

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17 posted 2002-10-20 02:38 PM

"And I float away into the sky
To touch upon the things of sigh
And happiness brings hidden joy
Like a child with new found toy."

(smiles) Awwwww, I love the whimsical melody and innocence in this, sweet friend, yes, always sip the euphoria slowly and let it fill your whole soul rather than drinking it all at once! This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2002-10-20 02:45 PM

amy,
LOL love that moth. Thank you for the read and reply.

Noah,
Yes euphoria is a pleasent drink.

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