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Lady Love Walks Into The Room
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Lady Love Walks Into The Room |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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(This is a jazz song. Big band sound type of thing.) She comes quietly from the daylight. She draws up close with fine perfume. City sounds fade out of mind when lady love walks into the room. She's got a spell to put you under like a night with a magic moon You'll hear hearts beat like thunder when lady love walks into the room. Dream lover score yourself a sailor the passion winds are blowing through There's adventures to discover when lady love walks into the room. Bridge: She wears the latest fashion designs a look of classic chic refined She takes dancing steps in new shoes. face made up tastefully to view she'll capture eyes and freeze minds when lady love walks into the room. Bartender pour the boys a buffer another swallow for the mood Cause they can't stay undercover when lady love walks in the room. When lady love walks into the room....huumm ummm Lady love walks into the room. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You made me think of my own Chanel poem... but I doubt it could ever be a song like this... when are you going to pleasure us with another song link, Ethome? I do so enjoy Isolation Blue... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Loved this bluesy song. You could almost hear the jazzy beats of the music as Lady Love walked into the room. Amazing song!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ethome, I love jazz and I loved this song you have written so well. I, too, could almost hear the music in my ears. Thanks for sharing this wonderful song. Love To All, Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric You got the beat the slow swing of heat the sexy shoe of hold me close in this song |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is sooooooo sensually delightful! (sigh) I know that feeling too when my love walks by in my dreams, where time freezes and I feel hopeles sin her charm! (big hugggsssssss) This is beautiful, yay, I too want to hear your MP3 of it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent! I could almost hear it, and it was easily visualized, as well! Surely a hit! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethome what a wonderful gift you have treated us with! One can close their eyes, hear it, see it....so very well done Ethome, much enjoyed! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - I like it. I'm going be taping a few songs I've written at the studio next Saturday... BC |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks to all who commented on this piece. I surely appreciate the input so very much! |
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