Open Poetry #23 |
Perhaps It's More |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Perhaps, it's more than this that I miss, I think. while reflecting upon the sunset of Delaware that was so vivid that night. How we watched the slow descent, with catch of breath. Each of us silent, and seeing more of the sunset in each other, than that which was ablaze in the sky. I remember the tiny rest area a haven on the side of the road in Connecticut, wares of apple design lined the walls and shelves, so quaint and you were patient, allowing me time, just to browse. How we laughed at ourselves at times ignorant of the customs of the who and where we were on any given day. An amusement to the local folk that always made you seem like a little boy unable to show sophistication. This a thorn in your side but a source of endearment to me. The wall was down just then. I'm still beside myself looking for the film of all the memories. The mountains of Utah, colors bright, almost impossible of spectrum for mere rocks. The horses on the other side of the fence hungry for the grass they could not reach. You were a picture of calm feeding and petting. My heart was warmed just then. The film I'm sure will turn up what a picture album they'll make. I guess in the end, it is the whole of you I miss. The experience made special in the sharing, of not just the world we saw, but the view of it through your eyes. I miss the man, the touch, the feel the color upon remembrance of mind an image forever of two, not one. WhiteRose "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-11-2002 01:30 PM).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Yanno what? Women are very complex. I wonder if other men have discovered this. The poem, incidently, is beautiful. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem Anne Cold hands means a warm heart |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nice poem. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I miss the man, the touch, the feel the color upon remembrance of mind an image forever of two, not one. Very heartfelt write. Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
A very soft, tender poem about remembering a love like no other. Your words are like well-springs of yearning. Wonderful poem!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I miss the man, the touch, the feel the color upon remembrance of mind an image forever of two, not one. ------------------------------------------ Dang yes!! You have nailed it with this one! Exactly...love it..well done! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I guess in the end, it is the whole of you I miss. The experience made special in the sharing, of not just the world we saw, but the view of it through your eyes." (big hugggssssss) Such yearning and tears fill your words, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't relate to the now and that now you share a golden promising sunrise each day with your love! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
The image of two, the soul of one. I know this feeling. A very tender write from your heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice writing...James |
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