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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-10-11 08:44 PM


Love In
The Same Degree

I'm testing myself
to see if I love her.
I'm testing her to
see if she loves me.
For nothing could be
as beautiful as spending
the rest of my life with a
woman that loved all of me
and I in turn loved her
to the same degree.

JamesLee
Oct12
2002


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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-10-11 09:11 PM


James...I don't know how you can test one another to see if you love each another to  the same degree..but, then again, perhaps you can.
Lots to ponder here...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-11 09:34 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-10-11 09:45 PM


JamesMichael...I believe in chemistry.  There should be a spark, a flame that envelopes both of your hearts. Love should be effortless, all-consuming. I like the poem; but I pray that you both will know the joy of just being together and being soulmates.  For if you can't, it may be that your soulmates lie elsewhere. You are a marvelous poet and I always have enjoyed your work. I wish you only love that rings true through the ages.  ***Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-10-11 09:56 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is quite a contemplative poem, sweet friend, I understand how you feel and though I feel we are all off each others latitudes by some degree, I believe in chemistry and there will always be one who can cut clear through our hearts with loves purity like the equator! (big hugggssssss) Here's wishing you the best, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-10-11 10:25 PM


James - the feeling this love between two that shares is absolutely like anything ever felt before...

BC

Gemini
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6 posted 2002-10-11 11:41 PM


Heres hoping that you both pass with flying colors.  Wonderful poem.
SimplyGold
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7 posted 2002-10-12 12:11 PM


Nice write. Forget the test, love unconditionally.Go for it and good luck!

SG

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-02-14 03:52 AM


I thank each of you for your nice comments...James
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