Open Poetry #23 |
deserve so much better than this.. |
FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
I didn't really want To be the one To force these feelings Down your throat To force these images Infront of you But Someone Has to Before it's too late You can't continue To do this To me I'm sorry baby But I'm not judgemental Or atleast I try not to be I only want to be honest I don't want to live Any more cliches After walking out of your apartment I dont even want To cry these tears When you tell me I'm not allowed To speak your name When I'm standing Outside of my apartment door in the rain Trying to get in Fumbling for the key And trying not to contemplate All of this but I'm sorry baby I can't help it I've just got to strap You down to this bed of shame Make you see What you're doing to me I'm sorry baby You're a weak man To be using me Like you do To be assuming That I'm always going To take this sitting down So much for respecting my elders You think you have me Wrapped around your fingers But I'm sorry baby To have led you astray With my naked vulnerability And new born naivite I'm sorry But someone has to do this To slap you with some reality Because I know I deserve so much better than this.. Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Fuzz, Wow...intense. And necessary I am sure. I liked the strength and determination in this piece. Appreciated that the physical part was just metaphorical. Good vent. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I don't want to live Any more cliches After walking out of your apartment I dont even want To cry these tears When you tell me I'm not allowed To speak your name When I'm standing Outside of my apartment door in the rain WOW what a purge... powerful words, and yes you do deserve better than this. Hold he hears and heeds these words. El riesgo vive siempre! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Strong palette, strong painting, enjoyed. |
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