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Beware thy dark deeds.........(Senryu)
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Beware thy dark deeds.........(Senryu) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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~ * ~ Beware thy dark deeds. Lest ye change thy erring ways, Nemesis be thine. ~ * ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Reddem thyselves, men Redemption is here at stake May you all be saved  (sigh) This is so well spoken, sweet friend, unfortunately so many have yet to seek penitence and I pray that with His strength and with ones own courage all sin can be cleared! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ To be honest with you, I don't know where these come from. I write them and when I read them I sound holier than thou! --Which I'm not! Oh, well, I suppose I'm supposed to post them, so I do! That was a pretty good senryuic come-back from you! Thank you! Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - and with dark deeds will cometh the reaper... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ I suppose you're right! One shall reap as one chooses to sow----so you're saying the grim reaper's gonna come after me?!? I really do try to be a good little angel, but I'm not always successful! Well, around Halloween, I hear he comes 'round quite a bit! Thanx for the warning! EA |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is wonderful. |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Linda, my friend, you do not sound holier than thou, you only sound wonderful to me. As always I can relate to what you write. I'm not an "angel" either, but I know how you feel and your heart is in the right place, as I hope is mine. Redemption; not free It takes some work to make it May we all meet there Keep posting my friend. I love you. Tammy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I had to read this one twice...to get the "punctuation" in the right place. The first read, I had the middle line with the first as a dependent clause, the second read had the middle line with the last, the first being the dependent clause. You made me work to derive the power of the meaning in this one! Great job! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SmartChick ~ I'm pleased that you found it "wonderful"! A remark like that, I find very gratifying! Thank You! ~ May you find inner peace--and keep it! ~ Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tammy ~ With a response like that, my batteries just got recharged and my ink well has been topped up! Thank you so very, very much! Sending lots of love and light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
VAS ~ Your response gave me a little chuckle! Thanx! ~ Wishing for you, all that you dare to dream! ~ EA |
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