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Of Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Love You are to me the fairest of rare The essence of love placed in my care My piece of forever’s magical mist The match to my soul eternity kissed. You are the holder of my heart Of immemorial start and This life is but a moment’s light To know the pleasure of your sight You are the force of essence course The very power and the source You are my love the meaning of The goal and soul of Eden’s love You are the other part of me That touches life and sets me free. You are Pandora of the box That frees me of this paradox. For you began and end my goal In other words you are my soul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww! This is so sweet. She is a very lucky lady to have someone like you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning read Sy! This one sure did make me...*SIGH* ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, please don't think I haven't been reading you each day...I have...my time's been constrained... but 'tis Saturday, my day of read, and respond... and my day of sigh... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lovely. Now, would you please just hurry up and clone yourself. Oh, silly me. There are no words to describe this magnificient masterpiece. Thank you. With Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You are the other part of me That touches life and sets me free. Seymour - I love this!! Thankyou. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling man, I'm so much a regular at the library that I think they will give us nametags soon. I simply have to come to read you. Keth is off in about an hour but we couldn't miss our chance to meld our hearts to yours. As always darling man you write divinely and you know I utterly utterly utterly adore it, and you too.  Tres bon tu est formidable.  They don't let us have long though so no time to write you a little ditty, so I'm sending warm hugs and lots of love as always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I want to edit my previous post but it hasn't come up yet. Whenever things are serious, I find I often crack stupid jokes, which take away from the quality of what is before me. I beg your pardon. This is a serious tribute to what is a fantastic love.... I thank you for sharing your feelings with us. And even if you were cloned, I personally could only bow before you, curtsy once, and back out of the room. Sincerely, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You are the gleam of summer sun its warming rays when day is done you are the light that calls the day the breath of hope in come what may you are the romance at the start the ending love that holds the heart you are the springtime and the rain the promised hope that comes again You are the one who makes me whole the sunshine to my shadowed soul your gleams of light shine down on me you love constrains and sets me free you are the writer of my dreams the other part of me it seems Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
the goal and soul of Eden's love....yes Sy, I think this says it well.... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Seymour...A stunning, heartfelt, poem of love. I stand in awe of the love you have written about here. ***Ivy Rose |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The essence of love placed in my care My piece of forever's magical mist The match to my soul eternity kissed. You are the holder of my heart Of immemorial start ==================================== You are my love the meaning of =================================== You are the other part of me That touches life and sets me free. =================================== For you began and end my goal In other words you are my soul ==================================== My goodness Stinkylove...look at you... hanging the moon and making us all swoon. How very lovely is this romantic declaration!!! You turned couplets in cupids couple Your rose of suppose inspires rhymes divine in your pen Sy-babes... You are the other part of me That touches life and sets me free. How beautiful is that thought!! all thats left to say is.... SIGH  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
that wasnt loud enough.... SIGH |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A moth can do better than that!!! ((((((SIGH)))))) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, she is so very lucky and may true love always fill both your hearts and may the only thing from Pandora's Box that fills your hearts be hope the love will always go on! (big hugggssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all that comment on this poem I thank you dearly. I am using a new computer and not to sure of what I am doing. But with a little time and practice I will overcome. JM, Wonderful reply, I tried to write you an Email with my new Email but not sure it went through. If you didn't get mail, let me know and I'll try and find out why. WWRS |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Did not receive it Sy-babes... did you get the pics I sent last week before your computer switch? we'll keep doing this till we get it right. *L* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwww how beautiful penned *sigh* loved it! Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Thank you dear. JM, Found the problem and sent that email. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Seymour...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., I'm speechless! Cop out, I know, but never the less, I'm speechless! EA |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is so beautiful. You place your thoughts so delicately on the page. Enjoyed reading Liz |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This speaks of a love brewed in passion steeped in devotion...and drunk everyday...beautiful Seymour...did you show this gem to your Pandora?? ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Thank you kind sir. Earth Angel, Love your comments. Elizabeth, Thank you my dear and I pray that you stay well. Scorpio, LOL not yet. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - a lovely write for your lady... BC |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Who could ask for anymore |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Thank you for the read and comment. Ruth, Big hug, thank you dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Love this love! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, You are a love. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is all the sweeter for having met the lovely lady for whom it was so obviously written...  ~ loving chipmunk hugs to both of youLyra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, How did you live to be so young? Wisdom can rhyme so well. I love it. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, (I feel I should call you that for some reason...probably because you write with such wisdom and so elegantly) I love your love poems so much. Thanks, Mr. Sy, for sharing your heart and your feelings with us. With Love To All, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-16-2002 01:16 AM).] |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Seymour it is realy a Love song Beautyful. Muys |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Seymour it is realy a love song {beautyful} Muys. |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Seymour It is really a love song Beautifull Muys |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Thank you sweet, it was our pleasure to meet you and your prince charming. Larry C, You are a true friend, thank you. Ethel, It was my pleasure to share it. Thank you dear. Muys I believe you, I believe you, I believe you. LOL and Thank you. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Sy, I think my MOM is a great fan LOL. Nah, she didn't noticed there were 2 page to this poem, so she thought her answer didn't came through and put two more in  Great poem. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, I understand and thank you for explaning, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Thank you sweet. |
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