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The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

0 posted 2002-10-12 07:04 AM

What is it
~ that pulled and held me to
~ ~ beyond the pretty face of you,
Was it lust
~ pushed up breast creamy skin
~ ~ or long muscled legs I watched dancing.
Was it sin
~ having what I desire
~ ~ that set me on fire
Or just lust
~ physical attraction
~ ~ no love’s emotion
What was it
~ that woke me in the night
~ ~ and rushed me out befor daylight
What is it
~ That pulled me back in
~ ~ was it lust or sin?

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

1 posted 2002-10-12 05:43 PM

Hmm, very deep question. I like this piece. There was one line "No love's emotion" that seemed a bit cliched and broke the flow of the piece. Wonderful write.

alice

"See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-12 06:30 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2002-10-12 06:46 PM

Wow, I really loved the form the poem was written in. Very nicely done. I think I relate to this poem. Sometimes we don't know what our own intentions may be. I loved it.
Hope to see more.

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-10-12 07:31 PM

Excellent thoughts and ponders...
Well done. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-10-12 09:47 PM

You pose some very interesting thoughts here Crimson Knight.
Well said...
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

6 posted 2002-10-12 09:48 PM

Very nicely done.

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

7 posted 2002-10-12 10:01 PM

The questioning of intensions, very deep. Nicely written.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-10-12 10:07 PM

(smiles) Yes, or perhaps it could have just been desire alone, innocent without lust or sin and just a mutual chemistry! (big hugggsssss) This is a wonderful thought, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2002-10-12 10:09 PM

I found it very interesting how you set this poem up on the page--also a very interesting scenario!--Have you discovered the answer yet?

Well done!

P.S. I thought "lust" was a "sin"! tee-hee

EA

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2002-10-13 12:43 PM

both

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

11 posted 2002-10-14 12:12 PM

I too enjoyed this poem and the questions you ask give us all reason to ponder.

Dawn

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