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Inexplicably Explicable
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Inexplicably Explicable By: Noah Eaton 10/17/02 They say there are thirteen ways of looking at a blackbird Seems today I could only detect nine Some say you either hear inflections or innuendoes But in the end it doesn’t matter, it becomes just a pantomime And if only you were here I’d feel okay Living another empty day I believe with all my heart it was the nightingale Perhaps we’re fickle but love is something we can’t leave behind My love for you is inexplicably explicable Your smile exceeds the heavens, your breathtakingly beauty blinds my eyes If only I can find all the right words to say And make it through another empty day It’ll be okay It’ll be okay It’ll be okay I believe It’ll be okay It’ll be okay It’ll be okay I believe… I laid in bed most of the afternoon Lost in your kaleidoscope fever, daydreaming of you Wishing I could be there lying under those palm trees Feel your head against my chest, crooning the blues Promise me you won’t run away I want to fill every one of your empty days It’ll be okay It’ll be okay It’ll be okay I believe It’ll be okay It’ll be okay It’ll be okay I believe… Please stay strong Please stay strong Please stay strong Love will find a way It’ll be okay It’ll be okay It’ll be okay, sweetheart Love, I believe… "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-17-2002 09:01 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Love the title. Very touching poem. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dearest Noah, You will be just fine. This is another one of your wonderful poems from the heart. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
noah...hug ya if i could...helen |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sweet Noah. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, the seas of love don't always roll smoothly. May calm waters be just ahead. Warm hugs for a warm heart Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, this is so sweet...but so sad, too. I like the way you're sharing your emotions. Good therapy, I think. It helps me to write my feelings on paper. I hope everything is better real soon. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, you make me believe! Precious words, love the opening verse, the whole thing is awesome! You are growing every time you write one...I'm glad I'm here to see it all. |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
hoping for the best for you and Joanna! SS |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, true love never runs smooth or something like that. I truly hope you and Joanna can work this out. Beautiful but sad poem. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah sweetie ~ Just.. Believe!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - I pray things are going well with you. I love your poem, you have a very soft heart... BC |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Noah...This is so packed with emotion and beautiful, passionate language. Your writing has always been and will ever be inexplicably beautiful. Hope all works out well for you and Joanna. ***Ivy Rose |
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